This is the story I think:
Slash was a friend of Stephanie and Axl.
The day of the wedding, Axl and Stephanie forgot to bring the ring because Axl was not paying attention on the wedding. Axl was paying attention on the other girl. After the party, she played piano with Axl in the bar when Stephanie came to found Axl. The girls fought. Stephanie wanted to kill the girl but Axl didn't.
Slash helped Stephanie to kill the girl. Everybody thought Slash was dead too. Stephanie killed herself in the pool because of Slash. Axl couldn't save Stephanie.
Axl was very sad because he loved Stephanie too much. He couldn't hold himself. He bought a gun from the gun shop then blow himself out in the snow.
Axl and Stephanie was dead but Slash was not. He went to the grave yart to visit Axl.
The end
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But the real story is :
Axl came home and found that Stephanie was shot in the head herself.
The end
Slash was a friend of Stephanie and Axl.
The day of the wedding, Axl and Stephanie forgot to bring the ring because Axl was not paying attention on the wedding. Axl was paying attention on the other girl. After the party, she played piano with Axl in the bar when Stephanie came to found Axl. The girls fought. Stephanie wanted to kill the girl but Axl didn't.
Slash helped Stephanie to kill the girl. Everybody thought Slash was dead too. Stephanie killed herself in the pool because of Slash. Axl couldn't save Stephanie.
Axl was very sad because he loved Stephanie too much. He couldn't hold himself. He bought a gun from the gun shop then blow himself out in the snow.
Axl and Stephanie was dead but Slash was not. He went to the grave yart to visit Axl.
The end
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But the real story is :
Axl came home and found that Stephanie was shot in the head herself.
The end
1 comment:
Erik, based on your use of "too," Axl wouldn't have been sad if he simply loved Stephanie. Instead, since he loved her too much, he was sad?
At the wedding, it seemed, Axl was definitely paying attention to Stephanie and not to another girl; there wasn't another girl in sight!
I could see either Stephanie's death, or Axl's suicide, or both as the climax; your ending, however, is quite fitting; Slash survives!
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